And To Think..
If
The
Home that we dwell in was foreclosed
On
Unfortunately we'd live outside
Greeting pedestrians and
Harassing
Them for
Spare change.
However, we'd sometimes be given
Enough to buy ciabatta melts
With Swiss cheese.
And maybe a
Soda
To quench our thirsts,
Having had not a drink all day, not
Even a sip of water.
Or eaten even a few
Niblets dropped by passers by.
Every day would be like this.
get it? lol idk. feedback?
hint: read vertically; there's a reason this poem is left-aligned.
12 comments:
sometimes i think i would rather live like that; but i'd be an ignorant homeless dude lol;
kinda get it lil bit lol;
gotta process it lol;
lol [ash]hole. peep how its broken up.
sht got nuthin to do wit bein homeless 4real.
ohhh wait is it the fact that we should be grateful for what we have and to think it could all come crashing down? im trying lol;
lol look at thee first letter of each line.
i mean, its abt tht stuff too
bt thts not why i wrote it.
damnnnnnnn!!! lol i was close though i was look at the first word of each sentence then that didnt make sense soo i went with the grateful thing;
lmao u funny shizz.
u was right tho
bt tht was the other meaningg.
arddd i feel better now i thought i was seriously dumb for a minute lol;
lol nah u good
cuz yamean its like
be glad u gotta roof
cuz times is hard
&& we could easliy be one of them
dudes sittin outside of wawa
lookin for cigs on the ground
holdin a empty soup cup
beggin for a quarter.
sht real.
exactly.
Well aren't you clever?! Lol.
And to think If Though She Was The One.
I neverrr caught that until now. I know Im like a whole forever and a day late but, its better late than never (right?). Besides, I need to get a sip of that ol' shit I used to love. lol; Never commented, so now's my chance.
Lovee this by the way. Confusing at first but...I get it now. After a few reads anyway. :)
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