2.25.2009

Poem Two

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In his mind, he sees murder,
He never meant to hurt her
But because of his actions, she died

He choked back the tears
In front of his peers,
But involuntarily cried.

That's not how he planned it,
He took her for granted
And now she's on to the next

Stage of the cycle;
The screams that he stifled,
He hears them inside of his head.

She thought she could save him
If she kept him away from
The vice that crippled him so.

Looks like she was wrong
And that's why she's gone.
The point he was at was so low.

What more could she do?
She tried to get through
To him, but he needed a fix.

Now, she's in a hearse
And he's got her purse,
But there's no money inside of it.

5 comments:

Anonymous said...

I hate the ending!
It was like a dead end.
(Not tryna be mean , at all!)

I still like it though.
:P

AyeTajiddin said...

lol im not good at endingss.
if you read my blog ull see tht lol jk

Anonymous said...

I read it!
I was just stating my opinion which is what you asked for.
Der Der...Der Der!

AyeTajiddin said...

lol i knoooo
i have a really hard time with endingss
it gets soo annoyingg!

Ki said...

I actually liked the ending, and I can't quite make the connection yet, but I think I sorta kinda know where you wer going with it...or maybe I'm wrong and don't know at all lol.